Tuesday, 21 April 2020

Hang on


 
It all happened so quickly! One minute he was standing on the platform, the next he was hurtling through the air, hanging on for dear life. It seems his fingers  got stuck in the door and made him feel like he’s flying and yelling. The train’s speed was way too fast, it shocked his dad and froze him on the spot.The incident as shown in the picture is scary, I would not want this to happen to me.
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3 comments:

  1. Mr P23 April 2020 at 08:49

    Hi Sakaria, thanks for posting this great piece of writing, you have described what is happening in the picture beautifully. I wonder how the boy is feeling, in the picture he looks kind of scared AND excited, what do you think?

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  2. Mrs Johns@Owairaka School23 April 2020 at 11:10

    I am wondering what would happen if they had to go over a bridge or through a tunnel. Squash!

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  3. Anonymous20 May 2020 at 10:05

    Kia Ora, my name is Nicolas and I am in Room 24 at Owairaka District School.
    I really liked your blog post about your writing. It would be scary to have your fingers jammed in a moving train. Have you been on a train before?

    I have also written something about this picture.


    Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog My blog

    Blog you later,
    Nicolas

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