Flying high
This was to be another of his incredible adventures, and he couldn’t wait to find out where it would take him. Flying so high he can see everything clearly from above, the green grass, the clear river, animals running wild in the forest and people everywhere enjoying their lives. It must be so exhilarating to feel the cool breeze from the wind passing through his body.
Hi Sakaria
ReplyDeleteI think writing is one of you special talents. I think you very carefully used words to describe the picture's detail but you also captured the emotion.
Fa'afetai Sakaria. You have put alot of thoughts into your writing and I know that you are well supported by mum at home. You have described your piece of writing well.
ReplyDeleteHi Sakaria, thank you for sharing this piece of writing on your blog. From the moment I started reading it I was drawn in and wanted to keep reading. I love that each sentence starts in a different way as it helps keep the reader engaged. You have really captured what is happening in the picture through your writing. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Sakaria, Your writing is really good. I like the way you used lots of big words that describe what is in the picture. You could've added a bit more writing but it's just my suggestion But still good job Sakaria.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Zarda and good work you did I like it. because you did a
ReplyDeletegood job on your work I like it so much and it is neat work and I want you to
send me more writing like this and I hope you will do more writing please will you send me some more writing. Here is a link to my blog: Zarda's Blog
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is J'varn and I like your post
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